We liked your idea, you seem to have shown thought into your performance aspect of your music video, however your narrative (Which I'm assuming is non-linear) isn't going to be easy to do especially with the lyrics of your song, It could be a really good music video but a lot will depend on your editing, so the audience understand that its a flashback, and good shot types to make your music video intersting since its quite a long song.
YEAH , IT WAS GOOD, BUT I DONT LIKE YOUR ARTIST! :D
Think Ryan is inappropriate for playing the Priest, dont think he will take the role seriously...
Sounds complicated, its going to be hard to edit to the song because its really fast.
How are you going to distinguish between the flashbacks and present time?
Make sure that the band is available at all times.
How are you going to show her confessing? will it be part of the narrative or performance? Planned well though.
And do you think the priest will take things seriously?
Our response too class feed back:
We have taken into account the feedback and have considered some of the advice but are content that we will be able to deal with the use of fast cutting and multiple scenarios in our video.
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